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"In the early 1990s, Bob Deering of Scripps Ranch worked as a shipwright.

One day, while building a deck for a client at their residence,Deering was informed that if he had any questions, the man of the housewould be coming home to nap that afternoon: he had chronic fatiguesyndrome.

“I made disparaging remarks in my own head,” Deering said. “Chronic fatigue. Right. He’s just lazy.”

Little did he know, however, that it would be a day he wouldn’t soon forget.

“That image popped up again 10 years later when I was diagnosed with CFS,” he said."

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Do you want to keep reading? Most of us probably would, because most of us like personal 'stories,' or what the media calls "human interest." What happened next to Bob Deering? What happened to his life?

This is an excerpt from an article that appeared November 14, 2009 in the San Diego News Network, "Chronic Fatigue patients fight 'lazy' label, support awareness.

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